Wednesday 18 September 2013

Planning: Audience Feedback from treatment

From presenting my treatment to my peers, i have gained feedback which has influenced my ideas. 
Firstly, i need to develop my storyline further in order to make a fixed decision on what the film will be called. 
I feel that the feature that would work best would be the suggestion that the crime committed could relate to the friend who gets kidnapped, this way when the other two see her, it will be out of guilt. I feel this will be effective but difficult to get across to the audience, so will have to consider a technique which will allow this to be portrayed. 
This way my title will either be 'those who cried wolf' or 'you're my little secret' as these were the most popular. Furthermore i do like the idea of 'gone...but not forgotten' as this portrays the idea of the girls imagining the friend.
Other than those points my feedback seemed particularly positive, with many stating they liked my idea of the cliffhanger.

Wednesday 11 September 2013

Research: Learn about film

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What have I learnt from this site?

  1. Film more of a shot than actually need be, as this could be a way to join the shots together.
  2. Shoot in one direction, and then in the opposite direction as this makes the editing look less obvious. it also means that I can use shot-reverse shot, which will give more impact.
  3. How I should edit...
  • First you put shots in order (an assemble edit)
  • Then you trim them roughly so that they flow together (the rough cut)
  • Then you edit them precisely, adjust sound levels and add sounds and visual effects.
     4. Ways in which to make my film poetic; shoot through things, use reflections and                      shadows, compare similar things.
     5. Sound is as important as the images.
  • Use separate microphones
  • Shoot away from distracting sounds
  • Listen before/while shooting
  • Record silence


Planning: 24 word treatment

Planning: ideas for mystery thriller trailer

Monday 9 September 2013

Research: action/mystery thriller trailers

I Know What You Did Last Summer...
In my feedback to my proposal I was told to look at this film, just by watching the trailer, it has influenced my ideas.
This plot of the film is established within the trailer, yet the full story is not revealed which is crucial within my trailer, in order to make the audience want to watch the film.
I like the way, they receive notes about how someone knows their secrets, this is what I intend to do also, but as we live in a post-modern society I shall be using mobile phones instead, where the sender is anonymous.
I criticise the background music used as I do not feel it fits in with the genre of the film, as it seems rather happy whereas the trailer is suppose to portray horror. Yet the voiceover works very well, this is a feature I intend to use as this way I will not reveal the whole story, but the background knowledge needed to be known to understand the trailer, can be spoken.

 

Pretty Little Liars promo...
This clip is a promo of Pretty Little Liars, another mystery thriller drama, the same genre as mine. From my proposal feedback again I was told to look at this series, so this is a clip of a drama similar to the trailer I intend to make.
It shows many different scenes where the girls are seen as distressed, however does not reveal too much which is something that I must ensure I do, as I do not want to give the full plot away.
The background music fits perfectly with the story of the trailer, which  is something I will also follow. It begins to build up slowly, although it has a fast tempo, loud irregular noises are played reinforcing the idea of thriller.
The short clip contains very quick shots, which builds up more of the story, and insights more of the people within the programme. The short shots acts in parallel to the fast tempo music and builds up tension, which makes the story understandable to the audience.


One Missed Call trailer...
I looked at this trailer because of the ringtone. As my idea is to create a mysterious stalker figure that harrasses a group of young, vulnerable girls via text messaging and calls. Therefore, may consider using this feature within my own piece.
This trailer does have background music however, when the ringtone is playing the scene is silent, which I feel is really effective so may use this also.
This trailer is interesting, as instead of using a voiceover, short scenes are shown each containing different content, explaining features which a narrator would say if it was a voiceover. I find this feature really effective as due to our post-modern society, the way the information is displayed fits in with this.

 

Taken trailer...
Within this trailer, I particularly like how there a story being told, and sometimes used as a voiceover when showing new scenes which relate to the dialogue.
I also like the way certain shots are quickly shown repeated to incite the audience of some specific features which make up the plot of the film. For example the shots in the time between 1:00-1:15.
The way the screen has been split allows the audience to view more of what happens, which will encourage the viewer to watch as it creates suspense as to what happens!